"The Poem as Still-Life" by Bram Dijkstra, in The Hieroglyphics of a New Speech: Cubism, Stieglitz, and the Early
Poetry of William Carlos Williams, New Jersey: Princeton UP, 1969:
161-198
Reviewed by Robin Freed
In the introduction to his book, Bram Dijkstra explains
that he "does not intend to prove that Williams was not influenced by
literary sources...this book simply hopes to illuminate some of the
ways in which painting, in its own right, influenced Williams'
literary concerns" (xii). Dijkstra remains true to this mission by
providing an insightful commentary that explores the dialectic that
exists between the poetry of William Carlos Williams and the avant-
garde art of Cubism and Futurism. The crux of Dijkstra's argument
lies in his method of situating Williams among late teens and early
1920's cultural icons such as artist Charles Demuth and photographer
Alfred Stieglitz and in his analysis of Williams' poems and his
autobiographical writing. Dijkstra's argument is not far-fetched as
he notes that Williams believed "under different circumstances I
would rather have been a painter than to bother with these god-damn
words" (qtd. in Dijkstra 70). In Dijkstra's mind, Williams is the
apotheosis of the poet who escaped literary conventions by adhering
to clear descriptions of the visual world, thus "by imitating the
methods and theories of painting, [Williams] tried to diminish the
gap between the two media" (198). Thanks to the influence of artists
like Demuth and Sheeler, "the work of these artists taught Williams
to see the objective world with photographic precision and to
translate its materials into words of equal clarity" (182). Dijkstra
believes that Williams was able to use the image as a subject instead
of the image as a metaphor because "Williams...was convinced that
only by adhering closely to the visual world of the painters could he
avoid the deadening conventionality and colorless monotony of
poetry." (189).
While Dijkstra briefly examines Williams' failure
at creating a visual language in the poem "Daisy" by comparing it to
Demuth's 1918 painting "Daisies," most of Dijkstra's analyses of
Williams' poetry center around the poems in which he believes
Williams truly achieves a visual rendering of words. Although
Dijkstra contends that "Williams' ...description of the most
important features of the daisy has a quality which is analogous to
the visual qualities of the flower Demuth makes us notice on closer
observation of his watercolor," he argues that Demuth's watercolor
contains a sense of unity "which we do not get from Williams' attempt
at still-life" (163). "Daisy" is the only poem in which Dijkstra
truly criticizes Williams' effort to create an object-image poem, and
even then he never fully interrogates his argument to explore the
tension that exists between image and word. On the other hand,
Dijkstra finds "The Red Wheelbarrow" to be "one of the best examples
of the object-image poetry [Williams] was developing" (167).
According to Dijkstra, "The poem is a perfect representation of the
kind of painting or photography the Stieglitz group might have
produced: it is a moment, caught at the point of its highest visual
significance" because "the words are facts, the direct linguistic
equivalents to the visual objects under scrutiny" (168). Such an
analysis augments the class lecture about Williams and his interest
in perception; his poems are not just about perception as we noted in
class, but the poems also function as an exercise as to how an
individual tries to translate his/her perception. Dijkstra's praise
of "The Rose," a poem inspired by Juan Gris's collage "Roses," sums
up why he finds Williams' talent so compelling; "Williams translates
the tactile reality of the rose into words which by the very
intensity of their tactile associations force us to consider the rose
completely in terms of the concrete existence it represents, rather
than allowing us to give it a metaphorical, or otherwise
literary 'significance'" (174).
Overall, Dijkstra's presentation of Williams
enhances the understanding of Williams' poetry and his techniques by
carefully situating the poet within the cultural context of the
historical moment during which he was writing. Whether or not
Williams fully achieved the status of the poet who transformed words
into images is debatable. Even Dijkstra recognizes that "[Williams]
was too much grounded in the formal conventions of writing to be able
to delete the voice of the poety, his subjective interpretation of
the thing seen" (170). Suprisingly, Dijkstra never once cites the
inherent linearity of words and writing as another factor impeding
Williams' attempt to create a visual language. Dijkstra seems more
concerned with arguing that art and poetry have an undeniable
connection instead of addressing the tension that exists between the
image and the word even though this very tension forms the basis for
his discussion about Williams. At times the text of the book depends
too heavily on the overtly subjective opinion of Dijkstra, yet his
reliance on Williams' autobiographical writing lends credence to his
assumption that "[Williams] believed that if he could only succeed in
approximating the concentration of statement which could be found in
even simple watercolor, he might be able to turn words into visual
objects, into those hieroglyphics of a new speech which he considered
far more powerful...than any existing language" (198). By presenting
William Carlos Williams in such a way, it is ultimately up to the
mind and perception of the reader to determine just how successful
Williams was in creating a "new speech" and just how
much "depends/upon/a red wheel/barrow."
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